Review Detail of DaoistJdI1lV in Essence of a Viking [Custom CYOA]
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a good story But there is one thing I don't like in the story the protagonist doesn't want to be the king because think with me you have incredible power you can become King by becoming a king and your family and your children will have more comfort you will have the authority and power to protect and support your family But instead you work hard for someone else to become king has more power authority than you who can betray you Because as he said power corrupts people and ragnar was corrupted in the original story now i I wonder if when he traveled to the multiverse and bring let's say Vikings to travel with him will Ragnar be the owner of the ship too
Essence of a Viking [Custom CYOA]
daoistgingerale
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I hadn't finished talking about Superman... then the fact that he's not really a brother could bring more depth to their relationships later, Zod could also without being used to pit the two against each other other by saying for example "why didn't the Els save the mc's parents" or even make zod a real cousin of the mc and try to make clarck doubt the possible betrayal of his brother... with just a change full of story possibilities opens up.
daoistgingerale:The statement that he cannot be a king is incorrect. Within his Essence, there are no restrictions on being or not being a king. His unwillingness to be one has nothing to do with the Essence.
and he also has a Charisma ability that makes his allies loyal to him, this ability would no longer suit him if he wanted to be a king, if he were a king, man, to me it looks like another one of those One Piece stories where the protagonist follows the crew of the Luffy or becomes Luffy's Vice Captain
The statement that he cannot be a king is incorrect. Within his Essence, there are no restrictions on being or not being a king. His unwillingness to be one has nothing to do with the Essence.
DaoistJdI1lV:and he also has a Charisma ability that makes his allies loyal to him, this ability would no longer suit him if he wanted to be a king, if he were a king, man, to me it looks like another one of those One Piece stories where the protagonist follows the crew of the Luffy or becomes Luffy's Vice Captain
I understand the guy but I was trying to say that this loyalty charm skill is more suited to a Leader, a guy who wants to become king
daoistgingerale:The statement that he cannot be a king is incorrect. Within his Essence, there are no restrictions on being or not being a king. His unwillingness to be one has nothing to do with the Essence.
It's only in the first world that he does not wish to be a king. He wants to see what would happen if he was loyal to his brother and they had no arguments over this small issue. Ragnar will not follow him in the multiverse obviously.
DaoistJdI1lV:I understand the guy but I was trying to say that this loyalty charm skill is more suited to a Leader, a guy who wants to become king
Ragnar will grow old and die. His children will take over the throne, or Rollo might or might not take it after that. It does not matter all that much. This world isn't a menace compared to others. Rollo will also come back stronger.
DaoistJdI1lV:I understand the guy but I was trying to say that this loyalty charm skill is more suited to a Leader, a guy who wants to become king
