I mean, it is a fanfic, so like 99% of them, they are very unrealistic, and the same happens here as well. Like I said, the author can write whatever he wants and bullshit his way through anything because he is well within his rights, but I feel weirded out when reading this. It just feels wrong. That said, good luck writing this, but this story needs some test readers before you post chapters. Good day :D
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