It's a great start I must say and I'm looking forward to see how our MC turns out and what future character's we will get to see further into the story. This is a great start if it's your first time writing web novels. I'll suggest that you try a different name, to make your novel stand out a bit. Like a name that hasn't been used before. But over all a great start and I am expecting quiet a lot from this novel 👍
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