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Hello Author, I read the first few chapters. Story idea seems good. However, some advice - please use a grammar check software, or a beta reader. Your punctuation needs a lot of work, and because of that, the story is unreadable currently. Good luck.

Naruto:the chaotic,the smart and the unhinged.

Cigo_Kas

Liked it!

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thank you for the advice.i mostly make this just so i wouldn't get bored,so,sorry about the Quality of the story itself.i probably gonna improve if people like the story that much,but i don't know though.