Review Detail of Nalzaar in Assassin's Dark Revenge

It's an alright story for me. I like the world background and how we have eliras, which give extraordinary powers to those that have them. I do have some problems though. First (although I'm not too hung up on this), there's a few spelling and grammar errors here and there. And also, the main character tries to seem like some pro assassin who's cold hearted and stuff like that, but he tends to get so emotional and likes cracking jokes (which sound cringe imo), but that is only my personal opinion. So overall it's pretty alright and I wouldn't say it's anywhere close to being bad. It just depends on the reader.