Review Detail of Kat_Mabis in Summer Camp of Love

This is a pretty interesting story❤️. The character development is good and so is the story development. I love how you illustrated the rare occurrence of new students coming into that boarding school. It made me more curious about the new student, Freddy. However, I would recommend working on your use of punctuation and grammar in your story. And also try telling the audience more about the characters themselves. Don't just describe the clothes the characters are wearing. But those are minor things you can work on. Overall, the story is really good. Keep up the good work👍😉