it is good for a beginning fanfic hope to see more of it. it does have a couple of grammar problems but they can be fixed over time. for the people who like Soul Land and Uchiha characters, this is a must-read.
Starless00
ถูกใจ 4 คน
ถูกใจdgun:don't worry about it as long as you are happy making the fanfic you are already doing great