Review Detail of God_of_hentai in Legacy of Harry Potter

ill admit its not the best hp ff ive ever read but its up there i have a few problems with how harry is basically young mastering his way through some things but its fine i understand why he is so thats not a huge issue main issue is the grammar dont get me wrong its not terrible but its definitely not the best it can be i havent noticed many spelling errors just a few words forgotten to be put in to make the sentence make sence all in all its pretty good its a little slow and yet weirdly fast paced in the end i rate this a 4.6 out of 5