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Well I'm sorry to say this but this story has a huge flaw which I I personally can't overlook and that is that the story moves way to fast in the beginning. I mean the main character unlocks bankai in the first chapter. We as the reader want to actually see how he interact with the characters, especially the first time he interact with them. He does not even have a moment to realise that he's in the bleach world before the author wants to speed blitz to the next part of the story and it's kinda sad because the idea is not bad and definitely has potential but the story just developed way too fast. I hope the author reads this so he can improve and make this story better or alternatively he's next stories.
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Hi there! First things first, we're glad that you decided to rate it as a four-star novel. That means a lot. I think there's some confusion here. Based on everything you've written, it doesn't seem like you've read the first book, "Hollow Moon: A Bleach Tale". What you've reviewed is the second novel. If we're wrong, then we apologize. We only speculate on this matter because you said that the main character unlocked Bankai in the first chapter, as well as not having a moment to realize he's in the world of Bleach. In this book, he never unlocked Bankai. It was unlocked in the first book, near the end. Apart from that, we hope we're wrong in thinking you didn't read the first novel. We also appreciate the review and hope to continue making the story better for others. God bless, Akito's Books
AkitoTakahashi:Hi there! First things first, we're glad that you decided to rate it as a four-star novel. That means a lot. I think there's some confusion here. Based on everything you've written, it doesn't seem like you've read the first book, "Hollow Moon: A Bleach Tale". What you've reviewed is the second novel. If we're wrong, then we apologize. We only speculate on this matter because you said that the main character unlocked Bankai in the first chapter, as well as not having a moment to realize he's in the world of Bleach. In this book, he never unlocked Bankai. It was unlocked in the first book, near the end. Apart from that, we hope we're wrong in thinking you didn't read the first novel. We also appreciate the review and hope to continue making the story better for others. God bless, Akito's Books