Review Detail of Nalzaar in From Depression to Challenging Existence Itself - Part 1

I was honestly planning on shamelessly giving myself a five star review but I decided to give myself an honest review of my own story. It took me over a month to start posting again, but I did start posting daily, so 4 stars for that. I can't really say about character design so 3 stars. This is my first work, so I suck at writing quality and story development, but I wouldn't say it's hopeless, so 4 stars.