Review Detail of tt_g in Marvel in Between Flesh and Steel.

It’s a decent story but the writing quality is really bad. Every once in a while the author uses the script-dialogue thing where there’s the character’s name followed by colons. I always hate those and I understand using it for writing interviews and stuff but even then the author wrote like the most generic responses and interview questions ever. I think the author stopped doing the script-dialogue thing in later chapters since I don’t see them anymore but now they have a new problem. They really like starting off paragraphs with a character’s name and comma as an introductory modifier, which isn’t a problem, but they do it for several paragraphs in a row so it actually looks like they’re writing from a template. Creative writing is supposed to be creative, and writing like that gets boring real fast.