Review Detail of StarWolf250 in [BL] Quick transmigration: My Fairytale system

Hello guys, StarWolf here *ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ*This is my first novel! I hope you don't chew me out too bad XD But I would appreciate any feedback (good or bad). English is not my mother tongue. Hope this work is readable.Now to the story. It's about a guy traveling to different worlds. They are based on classical fairytales (and by that, I mean the ones where not everything is happy ever after - good examples are Brothers Grimm stories) like Snow White or Red Riding Hood ... it is just this time something went a bit wrong. What would happen if some characters were a bit more sinister and others not as they seem at first glance? Well, let's find out!