Good things, the background is from the beginning, at least you are not lost in what novel, or where you are getting into, the character in the two chapters is developed well. The writing style is not difficult but it makes it enjoyable. The only issue at the moment is that the chapters seem a little long for the action that takes place in them but otherwise it is a good job
Rerian
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