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Peppernancy
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Honestly, this has a decent concept, but I feel like it’s not executed all that well. The writing style kind of eludes me as it feels like it was written on chat gpt. I’m sure it’s not but the habit of using metaphors in uncanny situations dilutes the focus on the plot. Additionally the characters seem 2D. But overall it’s not that bad, it’s just not the greatest thing in the world. But personally I stopped at chapter 42.

Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

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TalesByJaz
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First book so still in the learning phase. Characters I have found, is the hardest part of writing in the fic. Also, the gpt is my editor. Had issues giving it a proper prompt in early chapters. I promise it had become good in the later part of the book.