Review Detail of Ichorblut in Discordant Note | TBATE
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Oh, boy. I rarely write reviews as I am too unbothered and lazy, to do so. However, this is necessary. Reading a fanfic of TBATE is weird for me, as I forgot where I stopped reading the Light Novel and got bored, maybe because of all these new plot points and changes. They just confused me, whatever. But this is different, I dare say even better than the original, for one the character writing is more relatable, especially from Toren (the MC). The story is unique but not very AU in terms of changes, because of this it doesn't feel like a fanfic, maybe because the plotlines felt more natural and less forced, maybe because you didn't use major characters in start as many other fanfics just lacked the originality. Overall, this is a very very good fanfic.
Discordant Note | TBATE
TMKnight
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Thanks for your review! I will say that DN will eventually have canon divergences and a complete AU, but I intentionally set the story at a time when I had completely free reign without affecting canon too much at the start. (I.E. it starts during the TBATE Volume 5 time skip on an entire other continent) I hope you continue to read and enjoy :)
TMKnight:Thanks for your review! I will say that DN will eventually have canon divergences and a complete AU, but I intentionally set the story at a time when I had completely free reign without affecting canon too much at the start. (I.E. it starts during the TBATE Volume 5 time skip on an entire other continent) I hope you continue to read and enjoy :)
Because it is very hard to continue reading those excessive use of words in each sentence. For me, simple words are more than enough to enjoy a fic, more formal and distant words just kill the mood, you know. Forget it, I'll try again later. Let me ask this, is this a translation, right?
Lord_Azathoth:Are you using Chatgpt?
I think it's ultimately up to preference, but my writing is more formal. I eventually intend to write my own book, and I've gotta maintain a standard for that! Also, I want to convey a message and really show my readers the journey of my characters through the story. Oftentimes, more complicated words and descriptions are necessary to really convey the most you can in as little space possible. And no, it's not a translation. This is all written by me. I just didn't upload to Webnovel for a long time.
Lord_Azathoth:Because it is very hard to continue reading those excessive use of words in each sentence. For me, simple words are more than enough to enjoy a fic, more formal and distant words just kill the mood, you know. Forget it, I'll try again later. Let me ask this, is this a translation, right?
Hey, no worries! I just hope that the stories I write are meaningful and good for my audiences. When I write, even something like a fanfiction, I want to tell a bigger story :) I hope you do enjoy DN. It's a passion project of mine!
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TMKnight:Hey, no worries! I just hope that the stories I write are meaningful and good for my audiences. When I write, even something like a fanfiction, I want to tell a bigger story :) I hope you do enjoy DN. It's a passion project of mine!image