Review Detail of Ravenchast in I Have A Lifespan System

Introduction of using Murim like elements/korean names and how he appeared in a place where its seem like a training ground, It seems when he used to the body too quick especially when swifty moving around in this dark forest. The action scenes from chapter 1 to 3 are well paced, some missing "" dialogue the slow introduction of his golden finger may not be satisfying enough, as it appears later on in dark forest arc. There is no explaination of why he has low life span in chapter 3, maybe you can foreshadow it in later chapters? I feel like chapter 5 is a little too early too tell with the whole bet thing. Everything else from chapter 8 onwards I consider it fine for a reader who likes to enjoy spending time without nitpicking on loopholes or plot too much. I don't think character design was really protrayed him, maybe its up to us readers to view how they look but the slow world building is great in an aspect for cliffhangers. I also see consistence updates of every 2 days nearly Its also good how each pill has fixed days of lifespan, however I think its still unexplained how the pills made, maybe in later chapter you will have him become a pill alchemist?