To many adjectives. feels like another author who tries to show off how literate they are by adding as many adjectives as possible. Also It kind of just jumps into the middle of conflict.
SigmaStoicstudent
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ถูกใจdid you just drop the fic it says dropped but you basically just dropped a chapter i am a bit confused on whether i should read it
SigmaStoicstudent:From the 11th chapter, I started using as few adjectives as possible.
shypunk:did you just drop the fic it says dropped but you basically just dropped a chapter i am a bit confused on whether i should read it