Review Detail of Demons_Crawling in I've become the horror game secret boss

I finally surpassed the 50k words, so I guess it's a good time for a shameless author review...or maybe not exactly, I don't know. Think of this web novel as a prototype, I intend (if possible) to make it better and more engaging before publishing it as a book (probably on Kindle or something like that) so some things are prone to change in the future after all this is also kinda like practice for me. Anyway, I hope you give this a try, is not some masterpiece and is still just at the start, but im quite proud of this web novel.