Review Detail of Poet_Legion in An Extra’s POV

TLDR I love the Novel and everything.The author does great is fantastic.However, its flaws are really glaring.And hold the book back. This is definitely a good novel to read.But it's not something you want to read if you like action. The author does have quite a lot of fight scenes.However he's not very adapt at it. There's nothing wrong in the way he writes about it.But more or less the interactions between the characters while they're in the middle of a fight is definitely very reminiscent of middle schoolers yelling at each other on a playground. It doesn't take away from the story bit can definitely get annoying when in the middle of a very serious fight.We have to hear the monolog about our main character.When all of a sudden he's thinking about his girlfriend and it just gets weird for whatever reason. But by far the worst part of the novel is just the amount of side shit put in the novel. I understand there's a need for back story.But not every side character that turns out to be wildly.Inconsequential to the main story needs 2 Or 3 chapters to explain who they are. I don't want this to sound rude but for a lack of a better way of putting it.I honest-to-God.Skip about three quarters of this novel and I haven't missed a single detail. The main character is ray.It doesn't matter how much the author wants to make.It seem like it's an extra story or anything like that every.One who's reading knows the truth. However, the author doesn't know that and instead of writing the story about the extra who happens to be the main character.It's more or less about everyone else's story and sometimes Ray is there. Is that completely unfair to the author what I just said?Yes but I don't care. It's still a good story.Don't get me wrong.I'm going to continue reading it, but I am just getting really annoyed.At how much of the story i'm skipping because I don't care if it doesn't involve ray some matter. Even if I know, it's adding some back story to a villain.Or highlighting a undertone in the story for something that's gonna become important later.It just doesn't matter to me. The story is written in a way where it wants all of your attention to be with the main cherctor and unfortunately in this novel that is a bad thing. Mainly because the author loves writing about other characters and I get it. He's flushing out other characters in the story and he's making them feel like people. There's no harm in that. However, there is a difference between having our main character and the flushed outside. Characters on occasion and me going about 1520 chapters without. Anything involving our main character?It can get really annoying. Honestly this is turned to marndo a rant that I review because of already said multiple times that I like the story however I feel like I need to get my grievances out there. This novel has so much potential to capture me in a manner.That almost no other does because, even though I'm skipping so much of the story I'm still enjoying reading every moment of it.And that just shows how Is pulled in I am. I just feel like if the author switched up the way he. The introduction of side characters.The story would go up by a completely other tear. Because currently it's kind of a c to btier book And it has so much potential to become one of the most memorable I've everred