Review Detail of Kamikaze_Eagle in Galactic empire

Writing Quality: so-so grammar and minor spelling errors, heavily stilted and stiff speech.Story Development: What development? The dude doesn't work for any of his powers they're just given to him by a R.O.B. He can literally summon armies, fleets, and armadas at will. Any world conquering basically achieves nothing.Character Design: I know he's 19 and applied for a job before this...... That's about it, oh yeah and he has no girlfriend now that's everything.Updating Stability: No commentWorld Background: What world background?