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Raphis
RaphisLv37mthRaphis

Alright, it's quite tragic for Yahkel's life, only a few chapters in, and you've already introduced some surprising events for the readers. It's quite saddening. But I think that's one of the weaknesses of this novel. I actually like Yahkel's character and his positive and diligent attitude, but his life is turning out to be quite tragic. You're doing great, my friend, keep on writing.

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Nevyr_Maralad

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thank you my friend

Raphis
RaphisLv3Raphis

You're welcome, and don't forget to leave a review for my novel as well.

Nevyr_Maralad:thank you my friend