Couldn't even get through the first few pages of the first chapter with all the ambiguous racial and classist overtones about being kidnapped as soon as he stepped into a poor area. Stating to do magical experiment on the poor and handicapped by feeding them magical plants to see what happens, also people who were poor and in need of food but not handicapped or old/children wanting food being illegals. Wow to the wow, story might have a good basis but I cannot get past this and if this the first chapter how deep will this go? Reads like a person who has never has to struggle for anything or born with a silver spoon. The point of any story is to engage the reader. This story does a poor job of it.
Lightreaper
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