Review Detail of in The Legend of the red eyed girl

From my undersanding of your story... it is not shabby for a beginner in fact i would say its past average and a great start. Do not be discouraged and move on. Well Your quality or writing is not all that great, i recommend grammerly its an extention that helps cross check errors, you could run each chapters befor you publish it to your readers. larisa well her character is... in the progress i would say, i am looking forward to see if she wuld have that strength to make decisions concerning her kigdom or her authority in face of love. Well love is a mystery i always say... great novel i recommend it dont judge a book by its cover.