Review Detail of Efe_Kaymak in Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja

Item: Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja
Rating: 2.8

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I tried to read this book but it became too much for me this book isn’t even about mc himself.. that oc girl is like tail of the mc every single chapter you describe every move of the mc with her, like they went to sleep they trained together bla bla. There is no character development at all. not worth it

Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja

FirstHokage

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umm, it was only in starting chapters only, in later part of the story Yomi is not mentioned that offen, also story actually become interesting after the involvement of Uchiha clan, I am a beginner writer so I know made many mistakes in starting chapter, but I am trying to improve that in chapters after 100 😊

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No one will slog through all of it though is the bad part

FirstHokage:umm, it was only in starting chapters only, in later part of the story Yomi is not mentioned that offen, also story actually become interesting after the involvement of Uchiha clan, I am a beginner writer so I know made many mistakes in starting chapter, but I am trying to improve that in chapters after 100 😊