well what do I even say?the pace is horrendous filled with time skips.the opening and introduction to the why the mc is in nano machine and not derailing the plot is flimsy at best, downright stupid at worst.the characters? one dimensional as all hell, oh look mc is evil, ruthless, can restart civilization from the stone ages cause apparently he fucking knows how to make shit, and he is a shitty version of hisoka.I'd write more but on phone this is quite the chore. the only redeeming factor is the fact that it's set in nano machine and even then the author isn't using the solid source material enough, or it could just be the low chapter and wordcount for now.overall for web novel quality? not the worst once it has more content, an option as a time waster.
Marcus_Adderley
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