Review Detail of new_bie_789 in Reincarnated As Nobody With System
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HELLO. THOUGHT THIS SPOT WAS LITTLE EMPTY. THIS WILL BE A LONG SERIES I HOPE, SO SUPOORT THE WORK WITH POWER STONE, BRICKS OR WHATEVER VIEWER USE TO SUPPORT THE BOOK. AND IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS YOU CAN ASK HEREN?!!!
Reincarnated As Nobody With System
new_bie_789
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Alright before even ready the story. Your intro, even ignoring the all caps was wrong. Run on sentences kill any immersion a reed has. It adds confusion. As a person who has TONS of issue with grammar and spelling I feel ya. First if you can use Grammarly. Second is read everything you write out loud. If you pause add a period. It’s ok to have some shorter sentences. It’s still absolutely readable. Also the welcome to ALEX JOURNEY to ect… it’s Alex’s journey unless his name is “Alex Journey”. P.S. Everytime I run into a lot of sentences, I get the song Gods gunna cut you down by J. Cash cause, (LYRICS NOT IN ORDER) YOU CAN RUN ON FOR A LONG TIME. (THE RAMBLER, THE GAMBLER) SOONER OR LATER GODS GUNNA CUT YOU DOWN. So don’t be a rambler brother. Gambling ain’t a good style. Don’t run on to long or your story may die. (This Deadbeat signing out. ;)
If U hit shift twice on android type keyboards, It gets stuck on all caps? Also Webnovel’s app is garbage to write in. Try grammarly. I think it’s every where.
new_bie_789:hmm I don't have PC😶😅
HalfazHipocrite:If U hit shift twice on android type keyboards, It gets stuck on all caps? Also Webnovel’s app is garbage to write in. Try grammarly. I think it’s every where.
