Review Detail of superAyan in Fate's exchange

Story has a nice plot and I find the execution a bit fast paced, but I guess the story will focus on how Adriana will save herself from that nightmare. Writing needs editing author, and attention to details such as periods/commas/apostrophes/spaces, so it'll appear neat and much easier to read. Another suggestion is to break some very long paragraphs into two^^ I enjoyed reading your story, keep the updates going🙌