honestly it is a pretty good story, it has a good start with what i belive the first fan fiction that uses this characters as the start of the journey and the protagonist and companions, and not only that but you above that and are making a good point to make the character be like their counterparts but with a different spin, this time instead of the villians of turn they feel like the good guys with gheir interactions between each others, and i think it has a lot of potential for the future, i would like to see more interactions between them and the world around them now that they arent tools for the marine and whatever may come i feel anticipation for the future of the fanfic, it has truly capture my attention at the moment, i also am reading the translation one piece fanfic i know the plot dark fruit blabla and all the good thinks there this story has them at the moment with and even better grammar, so anyone reading that should come to this one as well
Kaydo_XD
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ถูกใจKaydo_XD:Thank you very much, I too feel that it needs more interaction between the characters, but I still don't know how to add every one of them into the conversation just yet.