Review Detail of Meowyumm in One Piece: Transmigrated as Rob Lucci

I'm loving the story, no doubt about it! But I will talk about the dialogue. Dialogue is like the heart of any story, pumping life into the characters. Your story does have some terrific moments (chapter 5 my favorite chapter so far :)), but here's the thing sometimes the talk feels a tad bit forced to me. It's a common hiccup in storytelling, nothing to sweat over, I did it a couple of times as well but it's worth talking about. But hey! I love it tho keep up the good work!