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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothนักเขียน1yr
2023-09-08 16:22

Hello everyone, Author here! I know this is supposed to be a review, but in my private fashion, I will turn it into a post with some basic information about the novel if you are more into solid explanation rather than vague synopsis: Genre: Fantasy/Urban with added romance Har*m? No idea, honestly. But I'm not going to add more and more girls just for the sake of it. It's not a lemons oriented novel (even if it will have elements of it) so I wouldn't consider this a har*m story. There might be more than just one love interest, though. Daily update: 1 minimum (unless something happens IRL) 2 preferable. Whenever we hit some arbitrary goals (100/1k/10k collections, set number of reviews, high vote count for the week etc) I will be adding bonus chapters to the count, that will be published within preferably a week, but up to 2 weeks in the worst case scenario. General feel of the story: MC using his portal to exploit the leverage of modern world in the fantasy one, while using the benefits of living with a system back on earth. In simpler terms, he takes advantage of both words to grow in the other. You want me to simplify even further? Look at the title. MC gets rich, gets bi*ches and slaps back at those who bullied him. Oh, and there might be a story happening somewhere in between :D As this is purely an informative review, feel free to post any questions below and I will do my best to answer them!

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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

I support harem as what guy can not bear demonstrating displaying his prowess. So collect them, but don’t make them just arm candy, give them some worth, either supporting roles or allies etc.

Weliam_Diago
Weliam_DiagoLv3

the name of the anime is "I got a cheat skill in another world and became unraivel in real world too"

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Celestial_Zero24
Celestial_Zero24Lv4

NTR Or No?

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothนักเขียน

NTR is too broad of a term to say yes or no. In general, no. Will there be elements than when stretched could be considered a borderline NTR? Yes. So, let me ask a different, more fitting question. How would I describe romance in this novel? WHOLE-FCKINGANDTHEN-SOME

Celestial_Zero24:NTR Or No?
Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

I think they were asking if the MC gets cheated on or anything like that.

MotivatedSloth:NTR is too broad of a term to say yes or no. In general, no. Will there be elements than when stretched could be considered a borderline NTR? Yes. So, let me ask a different, more fitting question. How would I describe romance in this novel? WHOLE-FCKINGANDTHEN-SOME
Aurelius_Imperator
Aurelius_ImperatorLv4

lol poor sloth

Malcolm_Massey:I think they were asking if the MC gets cheated on or anything like that.
Sadakat_hossain
Sadakat_hossainLv2

will be leave this novel if you win WPC Competition? or finish THIS. if you leqve this story I Don't wanna read

MotivatedSloth:NTR is too broad of a term to say yes or no. In general, no. Will there be elements than when stretched could be considered a borderline NTR? Yes. So, let me ask a different, more fitting question. How would I describe romance in this novel? WHOLE-FCKINGANDTHEN-SOME
MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothนักเขียน

Why would I leave this story just because it most likely won WPC? I simply used WPC to give it more exposure, that's it.

Sadakat_hossain:will be leave this novel if you win WPC Competition? or finish THIS. if you leqve this story I Don't wanna read
Manmeet_Singh_8886
Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

This was asked probably because your last three stories were left in between 😅

MotivatedSloth:Why would I leave this story just because it most likely won WPC? I simply used WPC to give it more exposure, that's it.
Corodix
CorodixLv15

After having read 100 chapters, I really like that it's not a harem, especially as long term that probably won't even work well. The MC is growing strong quite quickly and Fay is already really strong, so none of the other humans in the story would be able to keep up with that, especially those from MCs home world. Yet it's a portal story, so what's the point of a harem if they have to stay home every time the MC goes through the portal? I much prefer all that time to just be spend on the MC and Fay doing things together.

MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothนักเขียน

Oh boy, you have no idea how much you made my day with this! But let me tell you this, you know nothing, John Snow! I wouldn't write this story if I had to struggle with the powercreep :3

Corodix:After having read 100 chapters, I really like that it's not a harem, especially as long term that probably won't even work well. The MC is growing strong quite quickly and Fay is already really strong, so none of the other humans in the story would be able to keep up with that, especially those from MCs home world. Yet it's a portal story, so what's the point of a harem if they have to stay home every time the MC goes through the portal? I much prefer all that time to just be spend on the MC and Fay doing things together.
MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothนักเขียน

The answer is pretty simple and already included in the story, but this comment tempt me to actually include spoilery auxiliary chapter where stuff like that is explained. I don't want to explain it here cuz spoilers (duh) but you can go back to the hmm, main battle chapter within first 100 chapters? But in general (SPOILEEEEEEEEEEEEER) /// /// /// /// /// /// /// /// /// Human average goes from 1-3 Profesional (soldier/martial artists etc) are 4-6 Experts are 7-9 (already going beyond human limitations a bit rank 10 is special

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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Ohh, I thought its a harem. Thats too bad man...

Corodix:After having read 100 chapters, I really like that it's not a harem, especially as long term that probably won't even work well. The MC is growing strong quite quickly and Fay is already really strong, so none of the other humans in the story would be able to keep up with that, especially those from MCs home world. Yet it's a portal story, so what's the point of a harem if they have to stay home every time the MC goes through the portal? I much prefer all that time to just be spend on the MC and Fay doing things together.
Big_Hank
Big_HankLv1

I understand you my friend

Daoist_Culture:Ohh, I thought its a harem. Thats too bad man...
Jaden_Wagner
Jaden_WagnerLv14

I dont care about past ntr like ex cheats dont like it,but i can handle it. What i cant handle is FMC like fay cheating or getting raped or getted molested or even something close to that i come for a good time not to have my heart ripped open get enough of that in real life let me fantasize threw your story.

MotivatedSloth:NTR is too broad of a term to say yes or no. In general, no. Will there be elements than when stretched could be considered a borderline NTR? Yes. So, let me ask a different, more fitting question. How would I describe romance in this novel? WHOLE-FCKINGANDTHEN-SOME
Vince_Gregorie
Vince_GregorieLv4

The title didn't fit the story...

Daoist_Culture:Ohh, I thought its a harem. Thats too bad man...
machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Will a partner of his cheat on him with another guy? Willingly or unwillingly?

MotivatedSloth:NTR is too broad of a term to say yes or no. In general, no. Will there be elements than when stretched could be considered a borderline NTR? Yes. So, let me ask a different, more fitting question. How would I describe romance in this novel? WHOLE-FCKINGANDTHEN-SOME
webnovel433
webnovel433Lv13

why cuck?

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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothนักเขียน

No, go spam self-adverts elsewhere

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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothนักเขียน

I don't care, stop spamming my novel with advertisements about yours.

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