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Review Detail of UselessYato in Focused Fire (ATLA)

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[ROMANCE RELATED SPOILERS BELOW] Honestly just a great story. First time I’ve ever seen a story where it more so seems to emphasize the thoughts of side characters and I don’t think I ever saw Xing’s 1st pov which is kinda insane. My ONLY complaint is the literal random harem at the very end. It was oddly enough well done but the harem itself was completely out of nowhere. This was set to be a Xing x Azula for what seems to be 130ish chapters with unrequited love coming from Suki before she is turned away to find her own happiness. Then all of a sudden, Azula is bi and wants anything for Xing to be happy, including more lovers? Final chapter even throws in Ty Lee? Even with the suddenness of the harem, like I said, it was oddly well written even with it being random in my opinion. Again, this was an amazing story, well written plot, introduced characters and their backstories well, showed the relationships between the characters well, and some really good grammar for a fanfic. Can’t recommend this story enough.

Focused Fire (ATLA)

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