Review Detail of duckdragondrake in To Be Alive: The Reincarnator's Tavern Fanfic

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Thanks for the review! And about the "counter balance" that the MC got for his 20 talent bundle, it will become more prevalent during certain scenarios down the line. It's going to be a slow build up.And about the counter balance of the original MC from GnomeBob's fic, it doesn't make it so that he can't use the dark side, just that he has to mindful to balance both the light side and the daek side (as seen when he used rhe force lightning which is a darkside technique). Both counter balances for both MC's have their ups and downs and are not inherently bad.At least that's what I understood from your review. Thanks again!

sorry it was so post to be that he did not get dark side immune. there was no out right negative.

Are you talking about GnomeBob's MC or mine (Felix)?Cause Felix did use some points to get immunity to his personality being changed by using either sides of the Force. If you are talking about GnomeBob's MC, him getting the perk "Balance of the Force," is not an outright negative. While he is not immune to his personality getting influenced, if he balances well, he gets a boost in his Force powers.I took a similar idea to that to incorporate it into my MC's 20-Talent "counter balance" perk. The Nen/Hunter Power System is reliant on Will and Desire, and his perk will play a role in it similar to Rayleigh Rush's.

Great job I really enjoyed reading your work good job please make more.