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Hello guy's This is actually my first time writing... so please don't restrain while commenting, for better improvement. It'd also be nice if you guys were to rate my work, to get more traffic. I'm also writing another book 'Legendary Seer' for 'webnovel sprity award 2023, so I'd be happy if you guys were to also read it and rate it, and believe me, you'd love it. Thanks in advance.