Review Detail of NewbieJimjim in Life Stealing System: I Became Immortal After Reincarnating!

After reading through the first four chapters, I must say that the author is quite good at writing in many aspects. The narrative is easy to understand, and the plot is straight to the point. I am the one who does not like the detail before mc transmigrated much. But this one is quite balanced. It lets us know the mc emotion and decision-making when he talks with the goddess. The system and mechanics are also exciting and look fresh to me. Overall, this story has plenty of potential, and I hope you the best!