though your english could use some help it is mostly readable by context. you did a good job crafting a story that i really enjoy reading. though the mc is chasing an empty goal of what he thinks is pursuit of power what he actually is doing is trying to not fall into the mediocracy that he was chained to in his previous life. giving this goal which is empty in most stories an actual drive and purpose.
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ถูกใจThat’s because it falls into two different categories if you keep it going; the “reset everything your-life-was-just-your-imagination” or slice of life vibing, and the former almost always fails but is still incredibly common You also have authors that will make a second book, but that’s omega rare
XlegendX:Yeah sadly 90% of novels on here are a blind chase for power than the novel ends when they reach the top lol
DaoistArbore:That’s because it falls into two different categories if you keep it going; the “reset everything your-life-was-just-your-imagination” or slice of life vibing, and the former almost always fails but is still incredibly common You also have authors that will make a second book, but that’s omega rare