The whole story feels like a timeskip mostly desciptions of events in passing feels more like a summary at the back of a book. Rather than show its all tell which makes it impossible to become immersed which is a shame because theres a good story here if it was told correctly.
AERIC35
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ถูกใจWhy read latest chapters..its not worth trying now that you just copy and paste for 20 chapters and made that prologue but hage 5 actual maybe new plot. Doubt it. If your start is oazy and copy and paste means youll just be lazy later as well. Its lazy af and makes it not worth effort to even try anymore. Failed attempt
AERIC35:read my last chapter ..thanks