Review Detail of Zetronys in ADAM BLOOD RAIN

I'm sorry for the rather low rating, but I'd rather be honest than lie to please. I felt the story was told too much and too little action. But what do I mean by that? if you notice, you don't hear a speech in the first two chapters. The story has potential, I found the theme very innovative and how it progressed. description of places and times , the story progresses very fast . But I enjoyed the work , keep up the hard work