Review Detail of Hxvok in The Magician of the Night

Hi, it's the author here! I'm just here to say that I think that my writing feels slightly weird but I like it either way. I love writing since I can create my own world and splurge my ideas down. If you have any tips, please tell me since even if I'm satisfied with my writing the readers may not be. I hope you enjoy my book! Classic 5 stars!