Review Detail of eudine in Kyouhana: The Dark Lord's Bride Offering

I love how you write! This novel was well worth the time, and it’s a must-read. The author does a good job of depicting the characters and setting, making it easily imaginable. Furthermore, I love how you executed the transmigration—it was rather intriguing, to say the least. The only criticism I have is the odd word choice from time to time, and the mixing of past and present tense. Some of the internal monologue lines also felt a bit rough around the edges, and a bit out of place. Other than that, kudos to you author—keep it up!