This so pretty good. The flashback helped me understand a bit about the mc. There are small grammatical error here and there. But overall this is a good beginning. [img=update]
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ถูกใจBIG_GOOFY_SMILE:Thank You for the review.I am improving my grammar. I will edit the grammar mistakes as soon as possible
Sorry not a great romance guy so don't know much about it but I will try and it would not be the main focus in the book
Romance_guy:Romance?
BIG_GOOFY_SMILE:Sorry not a great romance guy so don't know much about it but I will try and it would not be the main focus in the book