honestly I really enjoyed the development of the story so far as it's interesting, i hope you keep posting new chapters so I can make a better review posteriorly. constructive criticism however is that you improve grammar as this can interfere with the immersion of the story.
Noxx_In
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ถูกใจyes am working on it but because of college work it is postponing time by time......let's see maybe tomorrow will be an update.
Player23:Hy Author are you planning to update the novel?