Review Detail of Daoist_Coomer in Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

The development is top notch, it's not too fast nor slow, I've read through the latest chapters and the grammar is goodthe The Oc is well developed and the right screen time for GM. Imo it could use a little more Detail on the Moves, but that's just me.I really hope this Stays, There is a Curse which is true , all KNB fanfics stop midway and leave us hanging. Good luck author