Review Detail of _Haven in Free-zing

This is such an intriguing story idea! Every story I’ve read with an concept like this, I’ve thoroughly enjoyed, so I’m very excited to see where you take this story, author! The writing style is simple, but there were no notable mistakes. I quite like how easy it was to read the first few chapters, and how quickly the story progresses. As time passes, I hope we get to see the MC build deep bonds with other characters in the frozen over apocalyptic world. I’m very excited for the next chapter!