The early chapter is so good. Your writing is well done. The theme is a bit mainstream, but I bet you will do well and make a surprise. Also adding some trivia once each chapter is finished might be a good idea. A small detail of information about the world building, character information or anything is fine. Overall I really loved the early 2 chapter I read.
GodRancho
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