Writing Quality: ⭐⭐ - The writing is okay, but there are issues, particularly with the excessive singing, which becomes annoying. Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐ - The story is okay at best. The romance is mediocre, and the plot progression can feel slow. Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐ - The characters are neither particularly good nor bad. The main character is mainly defined by being a singer and a McDonald's walking billboard. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - The updates are frequent and consistent. World Background: ⭐⭐⭐ - The world-building is decent but nothing extraordinary.
Level1Goblin
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ถูกใจOut of all the reviews on my story so far, I think this is the most fair and accurate. I appreciate the review. I plan to make another Celebrity story in the future similar to this one and I will take this review into consideration when I write it. I'll try to do less singing and try to make my characters more flesh and blood.
Level1Goblin:Out of all the reviews on my story so far, I think this is the most fair and accurate. I appreciate the review. I plan to make another Celebrity story in the future similar to this one and I will take this review into consideration when I write it. I'll try to do less singing and try to make my characters more flesh and blood.