Review Detail of asdwwe in Laws of Magic

Author here! some might be confused by why both the chapters have different povs, let me explain - this side story will contain three main characters 2 male and 1 female, as of now I am working on the female lead chapter. While the start is confusing, I am going to explain everything in short droplets of information so I don't info dump, and who knows maybe I will finish all the character's stories.