Review Detail of SecondVoidlord in Deku: the villain

If you improve your grammar, more people will move past chapter one. I would recommend that you look at other well-written stories to get an idea of what you should be doing. Also, you need to focus on how to describe your character's actions and thoughts better. Next, you should start reading Wattpad stories to understand what terrible quality fanfiction is. Finally, If your fanfiction looks like something from Wattpad, your going to need to improve your grammar.