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Item: No Magic? No Problem! [Asta X OC]
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Well, what to say? The story is good, but the problem lies in the points of view in which the story is written. In all honesty, what idea to write a story in the 2nd person? It spoils all the immersion in history.

No Magic? No Problem! [Asta X OC]

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It started as an x-reader fan fiction. That's why it's in 2nd person. I had already written 7 chapters when I decided to change it to an x-oc fan fiction. I didn't want to change every pronoun and verb to make it 3rd person. Sorry if it confused you.

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