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Mas_W
Mas_WLv412mthMas_W

is this the rework of the previous one? Will the previous one be continued or dropped?

Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System

souryourer

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SlySkeleton
SlySkeletonLv12SlySkeleton

it's an mtl story, this man is a fraudster

Reimoss:Good try but no, you didn't get it.Example:The grandma looked at HIS grandson.The grandson looked at HER grandma.This is the level of this novel.
souryourer
souryourerนักเขียนsouryourer

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Dao_Master_Penguin
Dao_Master_PenguinLv4Dao_Master_Penguin

Holding the ending hostage? Rather disappointing

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LuciFer_KarDam
LuciFer_KarDamLv4LuciFer_KarDam

Bro is it a Harem? please tell me it's a Harem!, if it's a Harem then I want Hermione, Luna, Fluer, Dephene, Astoria, Tonks etc in the harem please [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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machadogbc
machadogbcLv15machadogbc

Romance?

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Reimoss
ReimossLv13Reimoss

You don't even know when to use his and her

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souryourer
souryourerนักเขียนsouryourer

well you write two novels with male and female lead at the same time some mistakes are commonI am writing 8 novels by myself and did not have time to check Grammerso please don't mind the small things

Reimoss:You don't even know when to use his and her
Reimoss
ReimossLv13Reimoss

Good try but no, you didn't get it.Example:The grandma looked at HIS grandson.The grandson looked at HER grandma.This is the level of this novel.

souryourer:well you write two novels with male and female lead at the same time some mistakes are commonI am writing 8 novels by myself and did not have time to check Grammerso please don't mind the small things
Reimoss
ReimossLv13Reimoss

If you can't spot the mistake you have quite an issue.

souryourer:well you write two novels with male and female lead at the same time some mistakes are commonI am writing 8 novels by myself and did not have time to check Grammerso please don't mind the small things
Reimoss
ReimossLv13Reimoss

And it's not a small issue if it's in every sentence

souryourer:well you write two novels with male and female lead at the same time some mistakes are commonI am writing 8 novels by myself and did not have time to check Grammerso please don't mind the small things
Ruckducker
RuckduckerLv4Ruckducker

Super scummy

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Tunic01
Tunic01Lv15Tunic01

Kys

LuciFer_KarDam:Bro is it a Harem? please tell me it's a Harem!, if it's a Harem then I want Hermione, Luna, Fluer, Dephene, Astoria, Tonks etc in the harem please [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv13Kaiser_6117

although not to the point of him killing himself but I have the same reaction

Tunic01:Kys
Tunic01
Tunic01Lv15Tunic01

Kaiser_6117:although not to the point of him killing himself but I have the same reaction
lordhokage
lordhokageLv4lordhokage

do you know the original ones name

SlySkeleton:it's an mtl story, this man is a fraudster
Sami_Alfoheday
Sami_AlfohedayLv13Sami_Alfoheday

is this one harem?

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souryourer
souryourerนักเขียนsouryourer

yep