Review Detail of OnikunStudios in MY UNRIVALED BLOODLINES

Really great story. I have high standards when it comes to fantasy and I must say this book met them. I love the wrold-building and plot - full of twists and a lot of tension (making you want to know what happens next). The only thing that got me was the tenses - going to present tense at random - which affected the flow of the story for me. Otherwise, the author has a talent weaving a wonderful story. Keep up the amazing work.